These are some of my all time favourite foods. I have put them all into a poster and why I like them.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Mrs Roach. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
These are some of my all time favourite foods. I have put them all into a poster and why I like them.
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Hey Mark,
ReplyDeleteWow you’ve got a large spread of different summery treats, Nice work, these are some great tasty choices and it’s good to see there are some healthy choices you could have more often. The adjectives you have for each trait are really good, I can almost taste each one and imagine the texture. Which one of these are your absolute favourite? I quite like the look of those kebabs or maybe that pizza, I haven't had pizza in ages and now I’m hungry.
Great work Mark,
See you later in the comments,
Daniel
Kia Ora Daniel
DeleteThank you for your comments. I cannot decide on one absolute favourite. I loved all these food.
Mark.