Kia Ora
I designed a Kowhaiwhai today.
My design represents wind above the waves.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Mrs Roach. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Kia Ora
I designed a Kowhaiwhai today.
My design represents wind above the waves.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Mark,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on this activity, your pattern looks really cool. I especially like the colours you’ve used in the background. YOur concept is really clever and sounds really poetic, “Wind above the waves” very cool. I can see how the patterns represent that with the waves on the bottom and the wind swirling above.
For improvement, I would maybe suggest changing the colours so that it fits with that idea abit more.
Good stuff Mark,
See you later in the comments,
Daniel
Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteI have changed the colours to fit the idea of wind above the waves. Let me know what you think.
Mark
Hey Mark
ReplyDeleteWow I think it looks really cool. But what do you think? you're the artist.
Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteYou are right. The second one fits more with the wind above the waves. I am starting to like it more.
Mark