Kia Ora
I balanced sticks and made a rock tower for this activity. It was super fun but not that easy.
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Kia Ora
I balanced sticks and made a rock tower for this activity. It was super fun but not that easy.
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Kia Ora Mark,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
This activity is super fun as I used to do cup stacking in primary school and my brother and I would make rock towers whenever we visited the river by our house. A lot of people like to make rock piles as an art as it looks cool and is very calming.
I think your rock pile looks great and sturdy and I like that you also made a stick pile that looks almost like a little hut or cage. Maybe you could add some more detail to your text boxes pointing out the details in your rock pile and why you made it how you did.
What would you do next time to stack your rocks taller or what other materials would you use?
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Kia Ora Zana
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments. I have added more details to my text box. Please check out my edited work.
Nga mihi nui
Mark Cyril Holloway