Kia Ora
I hope you enjoy reading My Comic about Cor Stoop dropping his false teeth while fishing. I had a good laugh writing it.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Mrs Roach. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Kia Ora
I hope you enjoy reading My Comic about Cor Stoop dropping his false teeth while fishing. I had a good laugh writing it.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Mark,
ReplyDeleteCharlotte here from the Summer Learning Journey team.
I have loved reading your hilarious comic strip! I love the part where he says “Maybe you ate too many chips for lunch?” I thought this was funny. Thank you for sharing!
Have you ever made a comic strip before? I think it is such a fun way of telling a story.
I am excited to see more of your work. Keep it up!
Ngā mihi,
Charlotte
Kia Ora Charlotte
DeleteThank you for your comments.I have drawn my own comics on paper and I love to draw with colour pencils.
Nga Mihi,
Mark