Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Mrs Roach. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Tuesday, April 21, 2020
Day #27
I like elephants and they are useful at home. I have done a poster and labelled some of the things an elephant can do. I have also written a letter to Mum and Dad for a pet elephant. Do you think they will allow me to have a pet elephant?
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Mark,
ReplyDeleteYou have given me so much information with regards to elephants. Interesting that they use their trunks to breath underwater. I like the letter you wrote to mum and dad asking for a pet elephant. You have backed up your reasons really well with the information you learnt. Where would you keep your pet elephant?
Hi Mrs Wright
DeleteMum and Dad asked me the same question. Maybe the elephant can stay in the shed.
Hi Mark,
ReplyDeleteWhat fabulous writing. You have been very persuasive with great reasons. I would have never thought of the useful fertiliser.
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs Roach