Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Mrs Roach. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Sunday, April 19, 2020
Day #25
When I grow up, I want to be a superhero. Call me Captain Markie Mark!.
Superheros help people when they are in trouble or just need help. To be a superhero, I must be strong and love to help people.
Today I was a superhero gardener when I helped Dad mow the lawn. I felt happy after helping Dad because now the garden looks good and Dad is not so tired.
I am always ready to help anyone who needs me because I am Captain Markie Mark!
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Hi Captain Markie Mark,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea for a superhero name. You truly are a superhero for helping your dad with the garden. You have done a great job of mowing the lawns. I bet dad really appreciated it too. What other jobs have you helped with?
Hi Mrs. Wright,
DeleteI have also helped dad with cutting the branches.
Hi Mark,
DeleteNice job. You father would be very happy that you are helping hims so much. Well done.
Hi Captain Markie Mark,
ReplyDeleteYour super power for helping people must be very useful during the Lockdown. What is your next helping mission?
Hi Mrs. Roach,
ReplyDeleteMy next mission is to help Mum get lunch ready.