Kia Ora,
This is my Writing task today. Do you think schools should ban junk food? There are more reasons to ban then not to ban. Would you like to add to my list?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Mrs Roach. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Kia Ora,
This is my Writing task today. Do you think schools should ban junk food? There are more reasons to ban then not to ban. Would you like to add to my list?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Mark,
ReplyDeleteI like the ideas that you have put on this Google Drawing. It's a hard one the junk food debate. I think that lollies should not be allowed at school but maybe 1 small packet of chips every now and then is OK. What do you think?
Keep up the great work!
Mrs Bryce
Hi Mrs Bryce, I totally agree with you because lollies contain sugar that gives us energy which we need during games. Thank you for commenting on my junk food blog.
DeleteMark Holloway.