Hello everyone
This is my new version. I have included an introduction, points and conclusion. My conclusion is a rhetorical question which ends the discussion on should we ban junk food.
Thursday, August 26, 2021
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Hi Mark,
ReplyDeleteI think we should ban junk food from school. You have presented some very good facts backing this point of view up and I agree with them! There are too many bad health effects like bad teeth, from eating junk food.
Next time you should just stick to one point of view in your writing, as after reading this, I’m not sure what your point of view is. I can see you did some good research into both sides though. Well done.
Hi Kirstin,
DeleteThank you for your comment. I definitely support banning junk food in school.
Mark