Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Mrs Roach. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, December 24, 2020
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Mark,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I thought this activity is awesome as i love to read and write my own comics, usually about the adventures me and my friends get up to!
I like that your fishy teeth comic was a big gag joke but what happened with his teeth, I feel like that got completely missed or did you do that on purpose? Either way I think you did a good job, it was well written and humorous.
It is cool that you add your own comic, also very humorous. What inspired you to write this comic and where did you find the images, did you draw them?
Merry Christmas, Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Kia Ora Zana
ReplyDeleteI will do another comic about the fishy false teeth soon. I got my comic images from Make Beliefs Comix. I am glad you like it.