So The Cat has a cut on his leg.
Dads says we have to bring the cat to the vet.
And the cat sit in the van.
The cut was bad.
The cat get better now the cat an the girl is happy.👍💖
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Mrs Roach. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
So The Cat has a cut on his leg.
Dads says we have to bring the cat to the vet.
And the cat sit in the van.
The cut was bad.
The cat get better now the cat an the girl is happy.👍💖
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Hi Mark,
ReplyDeleteIs this true about your cat? I am so relieved it is better.
Mrs Roach
Hi Mrs Roach,
ReplyDeleteThis is my imaginary pet cat. He is better after the vet.